Rejected Volcano - Easy

[Quintum]

Username: Quintum_
Map Name: Volcano
Plot Number: 1 (/plot v Quintum_ 1)
Difficulty: Easy
Jump Count: 26 Jumps, 2 Checkpoints

 

[IPattyI]

Hey Quintum_,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have a "Volcano" map currently on our server that looks a lot like this one, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: The build is very mediocre. It's nothing special, it just conveys the theme but in a very attractive or creative fashion. Our "BabyDinos" map did the same already. And, since we're not looking for identical builds, this is just not acceptable.
• Parkour: The parkour's difficulty and length were definitely suitable for the easy difficulty. But, I found it to be rather repetitive at times. When your map is so short, you don't want to repeat jumps because each jump counts. So, the consecutive mountain-climbing clay jumps, ladder jumps, and head jumps just made it not be as varied and enjoyable as it could've been. This is fixable though, I don't doubt you could incorporate a wider variety of jumps/blocks.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!