Rejected Wheatley- Medium

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Hello DapperDaphne,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is original as we do not have any builds on Wheatley from Portal, so good job on that! ]
The build lacks a lot of detail and texture. Wheatley is a round robot whereas your build is square, Try to make your build resemble what you're trying to recreate.
The parkour fits the length of a short medium map (42 jumps) and but the difficulty of an easy map. Try to make parkour that fits the difficulty of the map you'd like to create. Your parkour does have some variance, but could have some more, such as pots, water and ice. The parkour feels repetitive so try not to clump variants and do not repeat certain jumps (for example, the head hitters at the start and the end). Also be sure to make sure that all jumps are possible in 1.8.9 as the jump from the enchant table to the glass (1 up) is impossible.[Hayley]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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