Rejected Xbox S (Easy)

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  • Username: TheProTroller
  • Map name: Xbox S
  • Photos of your Parkour
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    The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /plot v TheProTroller 3
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) EASY
  • Number of jumps (Optional) 31
 

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Hello TheProTroller,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is a bit unoriginal, as we have several maps relating to gaming consoles already; however, we don't have any specific Xbox ones, so good job on that!
The build on this is the main concern. While you did use a decent amount of block variety throughout, it just isn't accurate to how the Xbox One S looks in real life. Some things in particular that could be improved include; making the Xbox logo look more like an Xbox logo (particularly color wise,) making the holes smaller, and maybe making the entire build bigger so that you have more room for these finer details.
The parkour is varied throughout, so good job on that! The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps are both good for the easy difficulty!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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