Rejected Koala / Hard Parkour

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Aj448

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Aj448 and Terd
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: Koala
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The Map is located at: -58;-15 or you can do /plot visit aj448
Difficulty:
I believe the map would fit into the hard category
Number of Jumps: 75
(I got rid of a lot of the seen floating jumps)

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We removed most of the floating jumps, and replaced them with parkour jumps the are built into the tree itself. :)
 
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I love the theme! The build is great too, although the koala is a little pixel art-y. The parkour is very good too, now that the floating blocks were removed. Good luck!
 

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Thanks, Is there anything I can change to make anything better?
Not for the build - but if you haven't already, ask some people in-game to test the parkour and see what they think.
 

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Hoi aj448 and Terd,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is interesting, even if there is already some "Animal" themed maps. The build could be better, I think your build don't fit too much with the theme, only the pixel art and some random heads fits with the Koala theme, your map is mostly a tree, which is not original. After the tree is pretty decent, but there is a little amount of floating jumps which makes your map a bit messy and less attractive. The parkour could be better too, it's a bit varied, but I think it's still maybe a bit repetitive, mostly on the top of the tree (the slab and head part).

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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