Rejected "Fresh Air" Parkour Map

[WeirdoFish]

Username: WeirdoFish
Map Name: "Fresh Air"
This is a "Hard" map although it only has 54 jumps.
This map could also be too wide/big, but I can re-adjust some jumps
to make it all fit.
/plot h WeirdoFish 3​

Screenshots:

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A little about me:
I pay special attention to details in all of my builds.
Although this is my first map, I am fairly happy with it.
I have had almost no preceding experience in map-making
so this may not be the best map.

If there are any suggestions, I will do my best to change anything and everything
in this build that's necessary of change. Thanks! ​

 

[k_rissy]

I'm going to give this a 0, mostly due to fact that the theme is unoriginal. Otherwise, it would be perfect. The build is really well-detailed and it seems that you put a lot of effort into it, which is always a plus. The parkour looks like it could use a little more variation, but it seems like it might not fit the hard difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3

 

[WeirdoFish]

I'm going to give this a 0, mostly due to fact that the theme is unoriginal. Otherwise, it would be perfect. The build is really well-detailed and it seems that you put a lot of effort into it, which is always a plus. The parkour looks like it could use a little more variation, but it seems like it might not fit the hard difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3

Thank you a lot for your review!!! I am mostly good at building nature themes, but next time, I will do something nobody else has. I wasn't quite sure what to rate it, but after the testers did it, they and I decided a hard would be good, not because of length, but because of difficulty. I may change that however. Thanks!

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a -1
Positives:

• The build looks good
• Good jump variation

Negatives:

• There is very little interaction with the islands since most of the parkour is floating
• Most of the parkour is floating
• The theme is unoriginal (floating islands)
• Pretty sure this jump is impossible http://prntscr.com/nhpqsx

Suggestions:

• Remake most of the parkour to interact with the islands more
• Remove as many floating jumps as possible
• Fix the impossible jump

Good luck!

 

[WeirdoFish]

Giving this a -1
Positives:

• The build looks good
• Good jump variation

Negatives:

• There is very little interaction with the islands since most of the parkour is floating
• Most of the parkour is floating
• The theme is unoriginal (floating islands)
• Pretty sure this jump is impossible http://prntscr.com/nhpqsx

Suggestions:

• Remake most of the parkour to interact with the islands more
• Remove as many floating jumps as possible
• Fix the impossible jump

Good luck!

Thank you for the reply!!! I will certainly look into and change/remake a lot of the things you pointed out. Thx

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi WeirdoFish,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme like said before me is not original, because there is already some "Floating Islands" themed maps, please be careful next time ! The build could be better, the islands looks nice, but your map overall looks messy, because there is quite a few floating blocks, try making your parkour on/in a main build, and avoid multiple builds. The parkour could also be better, it's varied, but still feel a bit repetitive (There is a long ladder part around the start for example), there is also a little impossible jump right here : http://prntscr.com/nmbofi

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !