Rejected Oxygen not included - Medium

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This map is made by Sninito9
(Second Attempt XD)
This is OXYGEN not(red and lowercase) INCLUDED.
This map was inspired by this game, for me awesome.
Some guys (duplicants) were teleported into a meteorite and they need to escape from it with a space shuttle for colonizing another planet because earth exploded.
I suggest playing this (hard) survival game!


It' in my 2# plot (Sninito9)
In my opinion, it would be Medium (maybe easy..)


ATTENTION!!! THE FIRST PLATE (The one on top of the lapis block) it's gonna be fake!
Also in a bit of map you need to find the way, it's all possible (it's on top of the toilet)


I Hope that I make some progress, the last was terrible! XD
Anyway, great server!
I love making and playing parkours made by people!


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ATTENTION!!! THE FIRST PLATE (The one on top of the lapis block) it's gonna be fake!
 

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Hello <3,

I'll be giving this a +1. The theme is original as far as I'm aware. The build is well-done and it'a clear that a lot of effort went into it. For the parkour: I see a majority of ladder jumps; consider adding more variety (There may be some variation but I can't come online atm). Due to the length, I'd say it does fit the medium difficulty.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 
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This map is made by Sninito9
(Second Attempt XD)
This is OXYGEN not(red and lowercase) INCLUDED.
This map was inspired by this game, for me awesome.
Some guys (duplicants) were teleported into a meteorite and they need to escape from it with a space shuttle for colonizing another planet because earth exploded.
I suggest playing this (hard) survival game!


It' in my 2# plot (Sninito9)
In my opinion, it would be Medium (maybe easy..)


ATTENTION!!! THE FIRST PLATE (The one on top of the lapis block) it's gonna be fake!
Also in a bit of map you need to find the way, it's all possible (it's on top of the toilet)


I Hope that I make some progress, the last was terrible! XD
Anyway, great server!
I love making and playing parkours made by people!


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ATTENTION!!! THE FIRST PLATE (The one on top of the lapis block) it's gonna be fake!
Hello I'll be giving this parkour map a 0 and let me tell you why. I like what you were going for and the detail you put into it and all but the extra blocks don't seem to even match with the theme.
But still Good Luck anyway.
 

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-1 you didn't put detail in it at all. All I see is stone, ores, and obsidian making this theme unoriginal and making the map look like it is an ore parkour. and Parkour from the screen shots make the map look repetitive.You also could've used world edit to make the map. I do see what you're going for.


this is just an opinion not a fact.
 

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I'll have to give you a -1 as well, this map resembles Mario (I think it's a medium map) a lot in my opinion as it looks very 2D to me and as said above the ores make it look like a cave map, which is unoriginal. I have not looked at the parkour but from what I can see it's very repetitive (you use a lot of ladders).

Good luck c:
 

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Hoi Sninito9,
I’ll be rejecting your map for the following reasons;
The theme for your map is decent, as there are no “Oxygen not included” maps.

About the build, it may reasemble the game but vagely, as there is not really a lot of detail, and it really looks pixel-arty, so I would recommend adding to the build more of a 3D perspective.

About the parkour, it was messy and don’t think the length for your map fitted the difficulty chosen, I would consider to improve that area!

Thanks for making a map, I would love to see more maps from you!
 
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