Accepted Terbea

[MCBYT]

(based on a drawing of Andrei Terbea and his pet duck Wilfur at

)
Username: MCBYT
Map Name: "Terbea"
/plot h MCBYT 6
Easy map.
26 jumps.

 

[Tas]

Interesting theme. Good luck

 

[LeiSkule]

idk what that is but good job

 

[Mika]

Hey MCBYT,
I really like your building and on my opinion it's very detailed!
Good job!
I think the difficulty of the jumps and of the whole parkour as an easy one is good.
But in the beginning it's a bit messy for me, like I don't really know where to go and i think there's a tiny skip too, so I will give it a +0.5!
I hope your map is getting accepted :D,
Mika.

 

[MCBYT]

Hey MCBYT,
I really like your building and on my opinion it's very detailed!
Good job!
I think the difficulty of the jumps and of the whole parkour as an easy one is good.
But in the beginning it's a bit messy for me, like I don't really know where to go and i think there's a tiny skip too, so I will give it a +0.5!
I hope your map is getting accepted :D,
Mika.

I just checked it out and you're right, I forgot to spruce up the left arm/bird. I've fixed the small skip now, added two more guide signs, and added a jump (just because). Hopefully you'll like it better now, thank you so much for the feedback!

 

[BlueRaspberries]

Hey MCBYT, I am going to give this map a 0. The theme seems interesting enough, but the build could be better on the birds. Maybe making the eyes more realistic. As they don't seem as realistic as they can be in my opinion. The parkour seems varied enough, but could be better. I would also add more signs, as I was confused at some parts. Lastly there are some skips. http://prntscr.com/pgrnay At the checkpoint after the first bird, you can go straight to the middle. As well as this. You can skip the vine jump by jumping on the middle build. http://prntscr.com/pgro21. If you fix these changes, I would be glad to change to a +1 :) Good luck!

 

[MCBYT]

Hey MCBYT, I am going to give this map a 0. The theme seems interesting enough, but the build could be better on the birds. Maybe making the eyes more realistic. As they don't seem as realistic as they can be in my opinion. The parkour seems varied enough, but could be better. I would also add more signs, as I was confused at some parts. Lastly there are some skips. http://prntscr.com/pgrnay At the checkpoint after the first bird, you can go straight to the middle. As well as this. You can skip the vine jump by jumping on the middle build. http://prntscr.com/pgro21. If you fix these changes, I would be glad to change to a +1 :) Good luck!

Thank you so much, stupid mistake by me with the skips. I'll work on the signs/parkour variation, I agree that there are a few parts that could be improved. As for the build, I'll see what I can do; I don't have too much room while keeping the scale accurate, but I'll experiment with a few changes and see what happens. Thank you!

(edit: all of the above is fixed except the build, working on it now)

 

[sapqhire]

Hello MCBYT,

I'm happy to tell your map has been Accepted!
The theme is original, and the build is good. It's accurate to what you were going for and is well built.
The parkour has good variation. It was a bit confusing in a couple spots, and I added in an extra sign in one of these spots indicating where to go.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.