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Heya MCBYT!
I will be giving your map a +1, and here's why:
First of all, the theme for your map is original and it hasn't been done before with that specific videogame, as far as I've checked with the Parkour List docs, you should be fine.
The building for your map is decent and detailed at the same time, which I really like and I can notice the work you've done with this map so it ended this way, anyways, I have some recommendations regarding checkpoints that you might wanna check out:
https://prnt.sc/rtrlqo add , I would add a sign here so members don't fail the jump and have to start over, just let them know that they can click the checkpoint before they do that risky jump.
https://prnt.sc/rtrmgl , I don't see a point on adding a checkpoint here as if you fall you can get back up and do it again without needing the checkpoint, I don't find it something practical to do as they don't have to start over and do tons of jumps, they only have to do max 2 or 3.
Lastly, the parkour for your map is varied and I really enjoyed it testing it, some jumps were harder than others but overall you made a good balance to make it a hard map, maybe it's a bit too short (Considering medium maps need a bit more than 40 jumps) but it seems good to me.
Good luck with your map and hope to check out more in the future!
- fau
I will be giving your map a +1, and here's why:
First of all, the theme for your map is original and it hasn't been done before with that specific videogame, as far as I've checked with the Parkour List docs, you should be fine.
The building for your map is decent and detailed at the same time, which I really like and I can notice the work you've done with this map so it ended this way, anyways, I have some recommendations regarding checkpoints that you might wanna check out:
https://prnt.sc/rtrlqo add , I would add a sign here so members don't fail the jump and have to start over, just let them know that they can click the checkpoint before they do that risky jump.
https://prnt.sc/rtrmgl , I don't see a point on adding a checkpoint here as if you fall you can get back up and do it again without needing the checkpoint, I don't find it something practical to do as they don't have to start over and do tons of jumps, they only have to do max 2 or 3.
Lastly, the parkour for your map is varied and I really enjoyed it testing it, some jumps were harder than others but overall you made a good balance to make it a hard map, maybe it's a bit too short (Considering medium maps need a bit more than 40 jumps) but it seems good to me.
Good luck with your map and hope to check out more in the future!
- fau
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Hoi MCBYT,
I'm gonna put your map in reviewing for the following reasons :
-The parkour is quite confusing sometimes, I feel there is not enough indicated invisible blocks, so please try replacing them with something else (glass or just something else), or indicate them more please ! But even if the invisible blocks are confusing, there is still an other part quite confusing in my opinion, which is the whole tail part.
-I found a few exploits, I didn't patched them because one seems… intentional ? http://prntscr.com/rve5ep http://prntscr.com/rve5wm http://prntscr.com/rve6a0
-While the parkour is quite short for a hard, I think a few jumps are a bit hard for a hard : http://prntscr.com/rve7b4 http://prntscr.com/rve7zv (this one is more confusing than hard : http://prntscr.com/rvea2f)
The theme of the map is good, as we don't have maps from this game, the build is decent and the parkour is varied, but have all the problems I said above. So please fix all the issues before the end of the month, or your map will be rejected ! Feel free messaging me on discord/in game/where you want when you finished fixing it
I'm gonna put your map in reviewing for the following reasons :
-The parkour is quite confusing sometimes, I feel there is not enough indicated invisible blocks, so please try replacing them with something else (glass or just something else), or indicate them more please ! But even if the invisible blocks are confusing, there is still an other part quite confusing in my opinion, which is the whole tail part.
-I found a few exploits, I didn't patched them because one seems… intentional ? http://prntscr.com/rve5ep http://prntscr.com/rve5wm http://prntscr.com/rve6a0
-While the parkour is quite short for a hard, I think a few jumps are a bit hard for a hard : http://prntscr.com/rve7b4 http://prntscr.com/rve7zv (this one is more confusing than hard : http://prntscr.com/rvea2f)
The theme of the map is good, as we don't have maps from this game, the build is decent and the parkour is varied, but have all the problems I said above. So please fix all the issues before the end of the month, or your map will be rejected ! Feel free messaging me on discord/in game/where you want when you finished fixing it
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