Rejected Moai - Medium

[Luxuruwu]

• Username
  - Luxuruwu
  - Zendalf
  - Tree_Palm69
• Map name
  - Moai
• Photos of your Parkour (Provided via. attachments)
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it
  - /plot v Luxuruwu 1
• Difficulty
  - Medium
• Number of jumps and checkpoints
  - 51 jumps, 5 checkpoints
  
  Description:
• Moai Islands, inspired by Easter Island which mainly focused on different moais. This map includes Easter eggs and a wonderful scenery of moai islands! The map includes a lot of direction information for players to discover and it was created by three creators, tested by two members in the server. Hope you as the adventurers enjoy!
  

 

[Presidenten]

Very nice theme and I really like the build, (although builds with many floating islands aren't really appreciated from the judges)
However I think the parkour got a few issues, it's not varied and pretty hard for a medium map. There is also a bunch of barriers which can be confusing.

My tips on how to improve the map:
1. Remove the islands behind the statue and have the parkour around the main build and the end could be on top
2. Add more variation the parkour (more blocks) check the recent accepted maps to get inspiration
3. Make the parkour easier because it got many tricky jumps which is hard for medium

Good luck!

 

[Tree Palm]

Very nice theme and I really like the build, (although builds with many floating islands aren't really appreciated from the judges)
However I think the parkour got a few issues, it's not varied and pretty hard for a medium map. There is also a bunch of barriers which can be confusing.

My tips on how to improve the map:
1. Remove the islands behind the statue and have the parkour around the main build and the end could be on top
2. Add more variation the parkour (more blocks) check the recent accepted maps to get inspiration
3. Make the parkour easier because it got many tricky jumps which is hard for medium

Good luck!

Thank you for your opinion! We will improve the map right away!

 

[Luxuruwu]

Fixed according to Presidenten's suggestions! <3
- Added more variation in the parkour map
- Removed the islands behind the moai statue
- Nerfed some bits of the parkour.
Have some updated screenshots via attachments. Enjoy!

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello!

This course is being rejected for now. The theme is great and the central island build is nice. However, it would be preferred if you removed the little islands and just had the one big island. You can use world edit to move it closer to the course spawn. The main issue though is the parkour. The parkour is quite repetitive, with there being a lot of ladders, and quite confusing with so many barriers. Overall, it would be great if you could remove the little islands. However, I wish for you to change the parkour and put it in places where you wouldn't need so many barriers and it could be more varied. Please resubmit once these changes are made and, if you do it well, this course will be accepted!

Thank you for submitting this map!
If you have any questions, you may DM me on here, in game, or on discord!

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)