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Hey there, before going ahead with your map submission review I'd like to inform you that I'm only giving you my personal opinion/feedback on your parkour map submission and my personal feedback will certainly not affect your parkour map submission in the slightest, I recommend that you take in my feedback to improve your submission if there are any flaws, you don't need to and you're free to ignore me but anyhow, let's get right into your parkour map submission review!
Originality ~ I mean I haven't seen any parkour submissions like this before but it sadly isn't that creative from my opinion and if you put thought into it you could have made an excellent theme.
Jump variety ~ Sadly your parkour submission hasn't really got that much jump variety and that's one of the most essentials things necessary in a parkour submission, for example, adding, soul sand jumps, bed/chest jumps, slime block jumps, enchantment table/head jumps would make a parkour map much more interesting!
Difficulty ~ For an easy map 30 jumps is probably the most minimum and the parkour is quite easy In my opinion, possibly adding more jumps and maybe a tricky one would be a cool idea, just my personal opinion, nonetheless good luck!
Originality ~ I mean I haven't seen any parkour submissions like this before but it sadly isn't that creative from my opinion and if you put thought into it you could have made an excellent theme.
Jump variety ~ Sadly your parkour submission hasn't really got that much jump variety and that's one of the most essentials things necessary in a parkour submission, for example, adding, soul sand jumps, bed/chest jumps, slime block jumps, enchantment table/head jumps would make a parkour map much more interesting!
Difficulty ~ For an easy map 30 jumps is probably the most minimum and the parkour is quite easy In my opinion, possibly adding more jumps and maybe a tricky one would be a cool idea, just my personal opinion, nonetheless good luck!
hi there i have not uploaded the second picture but there are headhitters and 4 block jumps and i play on 1.15.2 so im trying to make a lag friendly map here, the jumps may not be that hard but its an easy level difficulty map here man im not trying to go for an expert level im building maps for fun and i just want to make fun maps here man
Hello mxdzy_xd,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't really original, as it falls under biomes/misc jumps, which is quite overdone. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The parkour is very repetitive, you mainly just used normal blocks and ladders. Try to mix up your jumps throughout the map, as well as experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
Almost all of the parkour is floating. Please try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating over the build and void as this can make your map look a little bit messy.
The length and difficulty is good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't really original, as it falls under biomes/misc jumps, which is quite overdone. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The parkour is very repetitive, you mainly just used normal blocks and ladders. Try to mix up your jumps throughout the map, as well as experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
Almost all of the parkour is floating. Please try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating over the build and void as this can make your map look a little bit messy.
The length and difficulty is good for an easy map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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