Rejected Basket Ball - Insane

[Swag]

Username: SwagifiedGorilla
Map Name: BasketBall
/plot h SwagifiedGorilla 2
Difficulty: Insane
Jumps: 124
Checkpoints: 6
I have attached 4 photos of it.
IMPORTANT: There is also an inside which takes up half of the jumps, but I cannot attach the file. It says the file is too large for the server to process. It looks nice on the inside so I advise you have a look.

 

[FlubbyTree]

It looks really amazing and menacing at the same time. The ball is very well made and the parkour is very difficult, so it deserves the insane rating. The inside of the ball consists of more parkour and the whole course fits properly to the ball. I also like the Colors and the diversity of jumps. I would like to see this map in the Insane section.
10/10

 

[LovelyLing]

Hello Swag! I would like to say that these are my opinions and my opinions only. So first off the build. It is the same block. Clay. You should add more variety to the outside maybe like wool or orange sandstone. For the parkour, from the picture it looks like you just used ladders and clay. you should add more to the parkour like vines, or slimes, or head hitters! Not many blocks are floating though so nice job. Again this is just my opinion! I'm just trying to help not hurt or offend you in any way!

 

[Swag]

It looks really amazing and menacing at the same time. The ball is very well made and the parkour is very difficult, so it deserves the insane rating. The inside of the ball consists of more parkour and the whole course fits properly to the ball. I also like the Colors and the diversity of jumps. I would like to see this map in the Insane section.
10/10

Hello Swag! I would like to say that these are my opinions and my opinions only. So first off the build. It is the same block. Clay. You should add more variety to the outside maybe like wool or orange sandstone. For the parkour, from the picture it looks like you just used ladders and clay. you should add more to the parkour like vines, or slimes, or head hitters! Not many blocks are floating though so nice job. Again this is just my opinion! I'm just trying to help not hurt or offend you in any way!

Thank you guys for the opinions. I appreciate it. First of all, dancy dancy spoon, there is quite a few head hitters and I can say the last jump of the course is a 4 block head hitter. Second of all, I can see where your going with the variety of orange blocks I could use for the ball. This course may get denied and I will work on it as a whole and resubmit it when it looks better.

I am taking feedback so feel free to leave a reply of the things you like and the things you dont like about the course. (For anyone who is reading this)

 

[LovelyLing]

Thank you guys for the opinions. I appreciate it. First of all, dancy dancy spoon, there is quite a few head hitters and I can say the last jump of the course is a 4 block head hitter. Second of all, I can see where your going with the variety of orange blocks I could use for the ball. This course may get denied and I will work on it as a whole and resubmit it when it looks better.

I am taking feedback so feel free to leave a reply of the things you like and the things you dont like about the course. (For anyone who is reading this)

Great! good luck!

 

[Faudon]

Hello Swag,

Unfortunately, I will be rejecting your map for the following reasons:

The theme for your map is original, as we don't have any basketball balls as a map entirely.

The build for your map is decent, it could get better by adding details but overall is good and it resembles the theme chosen.

The parkour for your map does not fit the difficulty you have chosen, it is easy for an insane map, so I would consider either making the jumps harder or changing difficulty. Also the parkour wasn't varied and all the jumps used were either orange clay or ladders, which made it look super repetitive and boring.

Don't let any of this discourage you; instead; use it as feedback and advice to make your map even better!

Thanks for submitting a map and hope to see more maps from you in the future!

- fau