Rejected [Hard] Crystalline Tower Parkour

[Skull5657]

Hey! Was just building a couple days ago and decided to do a parkour.

Warp: /warp towerparkour

Difficulty: Hard

Jumps: 80-85

Checkpoints: 7

 

[Angel_Scarz]

To many 2 block roof jumps...

 

[Tenshi]

Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips about your parkour map.
Firstly, Theme.
This map seems to have an unclear theme. A tower parkour isnt all that nice of a parkour. Maybe try to add some concept to the parkour? Like a snow and ice tower, or a hell tower.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
( I have no comments here, Refer to my Theme comment )

Thank you for taking time to create a map, Ill let @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some advice.
Best Regards,
Tenshi.

 

[Skull5657]

Hello, My name is Tenshi and I am here to give you some tips about your parkour map.
Firstly, Theme.
This map seems to have an unclear theme. A tower parkour isnt all that nice of a parkour. Maybe try to add some concept to the parkour? Like a snow and ice tower, or a hell tower.
Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
( I have no comments here, Refer to my Theme comment )

Thank you for taking time to create a map, Ill let @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some advice.
Best Regards,
Tenshi.

So like, maybe changing the quartz to snow? Wasn't really thinking of an exact theme when I built it. First parkour map and all. Thanks for the advice!

 

[Tenshi]

So like, maybe changing the quartz to snow? Wasn't really thinking of an exact theme when I built it. First parkour map and all. Thanks for the advice!

Maybe Snow and Ice would look cute. And no problem!

 

[Skull5657]

Does this look better? Going to do the rest as well.

 

[Tenshi]

Does this look better? View attachment 3572

Much better haha.

 

[Skull5657]

Updated the original post!

 

[gogre]

Rejected, the map seems too generic, we have alot of maps that are like this already, goodluck on your next map!

 

[Skull5657]

Rejected, the map seems too generic, we have alot of maps that are like this already, goodluck on your next map!

Okie dokie. Worked really hard on it and was really hoping that it would get accepted but oh well. I'll keep on working on another map. Well, once I get unbanned from creative from when the hacker came on as 'coowner' and banned all of us on creative. Any tips on how to make things less generic or the like?

 

[Tenshi]

Okie dokie. Worked really hard on it and was really hoping that it would get accepted but oh well. I'll keep on working on another map. Well, once I get unbanned from creative from when the hacker came on as 'coowner' and banned all of us on creative. Any tips on how to make things less generic or the like?

Ill contact you with some tips if you'd like c:

 

[Skull5657]

Ill contact you with some tips if you'd like c:

Sure, that would be great! Thanks!

 

[Parkour build pro]

nice map i could help if you want im a building pro