Accepted Bacon Parkour By: EddieL2003 & Girl_Gamer_101

[xEdzor]

Hello map judges and all donators and members. I am EddieL2003 and this is my 2nd parkour course. This course has 4 checkpoints. It is not too wide and it has an interesting spot (a huge pig). This is made in a void area. The theme for this parkour is bacon! (Pig) I posted 5 screenshots. I think that the difficulty of this course is Easy or Medium. (If it should be Medium tell me and I will update the sign.)
Information about the builders and tester:
I EddieL2003 personally LOVE MineVast it is one of my favorite servers. I enjoy parkour and making parkour and I enjoy building. I EddieL2003 don't know much about Girl_Gamer_101 but at the end I have signs about mine and Girl_Gamer_101's channel names. And also I EddieL2003 don't know much about the tester Daemonshi. So that is it for the information about the builders and tester.
The warp for this parkour is /plot visit EddieL2003 3. Also looking at the jumps for a difficulty this parkour seems like it should be Medium.

 

[Tenshi]

Hello dear parkourist! My name is Tenshi and Im going to leave you some tips and comments about your parkour.
I will also state wiether or not I think it should be accepted, rejected, or reviewed.

Firstly, Theme.
I feel that this theme is clear. You tried to make a pig, Which you did. The theme however, Is lacking alot of detail. The pig is plain wool and only has 2 legs, And the quartz slabs dont mix with the pig theme at all. Perhaps change them?

Secondly, Parkour.
View this thread here for help with jumps: http://www.minecraftforum.net/forum...tive-mode/369499-parkour-creation-tips-tricks

Thirdly, Rank.
This parkour would be ranked easy because of the jumps. You should only have one checkpoint in this map, As a parkour map with 32 jumps shouldn't have 3.

And Lastly, My comment.
This parkour should or should not be denied because of a few reasons.
Reasons Why:
- The lack of color and contrast
- The un-originality ( We have a cow like this in hard )
- The color choice

Thank you for submitting a parkour, Remember that this is not a final decision. The final decision will be made by an official of a higher rank. I'll let my fellow friends and parkour map makers, @Nixi and @Pud96 give you some comments.

Thank you for your time. If this parkour is accepted/rejected, Remember that you can always submit another parkour, at another time.


~Tenshi

 

[xEdzor]

Ayy sans! We meet again! So the pigs legs are close together because Girl_Gamer_101 made a small body. I will try to make the pig more than solid wool. I will also let Girl_Gamer_101 know about this. Also the jump count for the course is 64 Jumps. I will try to use red to make more Bacon and I will make this better! Thanks for the response Sans!

EddieL2003 Well-Known-Member

 

[Tenshi]

Ayy sans! We meet again! So the pigs legs are close together because Girl_Gamer_101 made a small body. I will try to make the pig more than solid wool. I will also let Girl_Gamer_101 know about this. Also the jump count for the course is 64 Jumps. I will try to use red to make more Bacon and I will make this better! Thanks for the response Sans!

EddieL2003 Well-Known-Member

Perhaps use clay?

 

[gogre]

I like this map, the pig is a bit derpy but the theme is really clear, it was great fun and simple to play for me, ive accepted this map! Congrats!