Rejected Drive In Movie Theater Parkour

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Angel_Scarz

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#2
Not a clear theme + you submitted 2 recently
 

Wafflethecat

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Hello! I wanna give some feedback on your map.

Pros:
-The theme seemed like a cool idea, and if done correctly it could turn out well!

Cons:
-As Sans said it looks quite choppy.
-The theme does not seem very clear, if you did not tell me what this was I would not have guessed Drive through movie theater.
-The cars. I thought they were chairs at first.
-It looks very quickly thrown together, it does not appear you spent much time on it.

Tips:
-It is better to take a week and build 1 very good parkour, then post very bad ones, every day or 2.
 

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Denied - Theme is okay but the parkour is a bit confusing, I could not figure out where to go for a while and I didnt /really/ enjoy playing it. Better luck next time!
 
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