Rejected Teletubbies PK - Donator Easy

[Blurpyfied]

39 Jumps
6 checkpoints
/plot home Blurpyfied 11

http://imgur.com/a/FIViDR1

 

[chosm]

Well...

 

[WICKEDMagma]

I will be giving you a -1

The build is very bland and plain.
The pk doesn't fit the easy difficulty well.

Lots of improvement can be made.

 

[curtis]

I agree with Magma, this build is just painfully okay. The shaping of the island needs work to make it less like it was worldedited in. The floating diorite area and cave is very lacking and needs a revision (or removal). The trees also need work.

The parkour is too hard to an easy but would fit in as a medium. Quality-wise, it was acceptable, but the several tp blocks were unnecessary. The dropper at the end was a creative idea but it isn't executed well since it has no challenge to it.

Also, why is the purple one holding a sword and shield?

 

[IPenguinI]

Cool idea, the tubbies are a little small, and the map feels tight.
Would like to see a redesign, because I would love this map :)

 

[chosm]

bro wanna make a redo together

 

[IPenguinI]

bro wanna make a redo together

Nah you an blurpy do it im bad at building.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Blurpyfied,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done.
The build is a main concern. As mentioned above, the shaping needs to be reworked on this map, and it looks quite plain at present. The teletubbies themselves should be expanded and made the main feature of this map.
The parkour is varied a bit, but a bit confusing/messy at certain parts. The tp blocks also seem excessive with this map. The length of the course is good for an easy map, but the difficulty is inconsistent.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina