Rejected Wings

[Dannnn]

• Dannn_ built the map
• it is called Wings
• its on /plot v Dannn_
• it is an easy map
• 37 jumps
• it is within the width and Hight limits

 

[squonkz]

Looks great! However the theme has been used many times and likley to get rejected :(

 

[Dannnn]

Looks great! However the theme has been used many times and likley to get rejected :(

yeah i been told that a few times but idm if it doesent get exepted because it was fun to make but thankyou :))

 

[Elly_x]

Hello Dannn_,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around dragons (Cynder, HeavenVSHell, Dragon). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!

The BUILD of your map is good. The shaping of the legs is a bit off, but overall its a pretty well executed and attractive build.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are slimes, ladders regular jumps, and fences. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. I also recommend trying to utilize the area of your build more when creating the parkour.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly