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hihi this map is a great concept /idea!
Unfortunately, the build does lack detail and texture. Try having the build on one main island so it looks less messy and more together.
The difficulties of your jumps are quite inconsistent- they jump around the easy/medium/hard difficulties throughout the map. Try to make your parkour difficulty consistent throughout. Although there is some variance, your map does need more of it. You can use things such as iron bars, fences, cacti , heads, etc. Try not to clump these variations together either as it can make the parkour repetitive.
I hope this helps c;
Have a good day/night.
Unfortunately, the build does lack detail and texture. Try having the build on one main island so it looks less messy and more together.
The difficulties of your jumps are quite inconsistent- they jump around the easy/medium/hard difficulties throughout the map. Try to make your parkour difficulty consistent throughout. Although there is some variance, your map does need more of it. You can use things such as iron bars, fences, cacti , heads, etc. Try not to clump these variations together either as it can make the parkour repetitive.
I hope this helps c;
Have a good day/night.
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Hello 14204,
Your map has been REJECTED.
For your theme, I would focus more on one of the landmarks you added to your map instead of your general theme of Chicago. Your theme is original but it isn't a theme I would suggest because of how broad it is.
For the build like I said for the theme, focus on one part of the map instead of 3. Because you had 3 different parts of the map, there was a lot of detail that was lacking because it was made on a smaller scale. Bigger builds allow for more detail. The build also was held a lot back by the floating parkour which drew a lot of attention away from the build which is something that is important for maps on Manacube.
The Parkour was unbalanced which means there were some jumps that were too hard for the medium difficulty. Try getting other people to test the parkour before submitting the map. The parkour also lacked a lot of variety
Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck with future submissions. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.
Thanks,
Jacob
Your map has been REJECTED.
For your theme, I would focus more on one of the landmarks you added to your map instead of your general theme of Chicago. Your theme is original but it isn't a theme I would suggest because of how broad it is.
For the build like I said for the theme, focus on one part of the map instead of 3. Because you had 3 different parts of the map, there was a lot of detail that was lacking because it was made on a smaller scale. Bigger builds allow for more detail. The build also was held a lot back by the floating parkour which drew a lot of attention away from the build which is something that is important for maps on Manacube.
The Parkour was unbalanced which means there were some jumps that were too hard for the medium difficulty. Try getting other people to test the parkour before submitting the map. The parkour also lacked a lot of variety
Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck with future submissions. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.
Thanks,
Jacob
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