Rejected Stronghold [ easy ]

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  • Username : LegalDude
  • Map name : Stronghold
  • The # of your Plot : 61;-126
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane, Dropper) : Easy
  • Number of jumps : 31
 

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Heya,

Sadly, this theme is unoriginal.
The build does have some detail on the inside but does lack it! Try to make your build aesthetically pleasing on both the inside and the outside. Try to have a main island and a main build for your map.
The parkour does fit the difficult of an easy map which is great! However it does lack variance. Try adding more blocks such as fences, pots, water, ice etc,

I hope this helps! c;
 
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Your build is all floating which isn't allowed.
Floating builds are allowed, it's all/majority of the parkour being floating that isn't allowed.
 

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Hi there, LegalDude!
Unfortunately, I'm here to tell you that your map is rejected.

The THEME is unoriginal, as we have plenty of maps that are based around structures, entities and objects from Minecraft. When making a map, be sure to pick an original theme! A link to a document with all accepted maps and themes can be found here.

The BUILD is a bit unattractive from the outside and only houses about half of the map. The inside is also a bit boring, with simple variation of stone brick and small details here and there. When you make a map, be sure to put the majority of it within or on an attractive looking main build.

The PARKOUR fits the length of an easy map, but was very repetitive and half of it was floating, which is not ideal anymore for maps. When you create parkour, be sure to use varied jumps like neos and water jumps and varied blocks like pots and panes!

All the best in your future submissions! [Lofi]
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
 
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