Rejected 'Winter Wonderland' Parkour (Easy)

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Angel_Scarz

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I understand the theme, its nice i like the theme it feels very clear to me 'winterland' Candy canes raindeer and ice.. but there is a lot of problems with this maps... Reasons Include:
We already have a candy cane parkour in hard.
The raindeer are low detailed.
And the block choice for fences does not make a lot of sense.. And the build is a bit weak
But don't make that discourge you into making new maps..

(Thats why i think it maby or will be rejected NOT STAFF)
 
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I understand the theme, its nice i like the theme it feels very clear to me 'winterland' Candy canes raindeer and ice.. but there is a lot of problems with this maps... Reasons Include:
We already have a candy cane parkour in hard.
The raindeer are low detailed.
And the block choice for fences does not make a lot of sense.. And the build is a bit weak
But don't make that discourge you into making new maps..

(Thats why i think it maby or will be rejected NOT STAFF)
Thanks for the feedback! I'll look into it :D
 

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Im going to be quick, but not so sweet.

We have a candy cane parkour,I had no idea those were reindeer, the design is sloppy and weak, and the map looks plain.

This would be a map I would play out of boredom, not because it looked interesting.
 

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I didnt understand it, But the parkour was kinda nice I guess. Not reviewing, but you can always submit another map.
 
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I love the reindeers. But the fences don't fit in the environment that well, and the candy canes could use some improvement. But maybe add more decoration to the environment around the parkour in the future? Otherwise, it's a short and sweet parkour to play!
 

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I like your parkour the idea is a sweet one xD
But, There are a lot of parkours that are Candys, Snow etc
If i was Staff i will told u that it is not complete because it is too short.
and is not too nice to look at it.
For the next time you can make a different parkour theme or add some more details because
a christmas parkour will not be bad :D

Good luck of what admins say!
[DOUBLEPOST=1452607376][/DOUBLEPOST]I saw that there is another thing.
"Invisible blocks"
An admin told me that they confuse people.
So maybe you can use another block at that parts :D

Good luck!

Also i love the reeinders so cute

When you finish the parkour use a green wool not snow :D
[DOUBLEPOST=1452607618,1452607235][/DOUBLEPOST]use a green wool at the end and over it the plesure plate.
 

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The theme is clear, and it is kind of cool.
Flaws:
-Reindeer aren't very detailed
-Map similar to this one
I think this map maybe or will be rejected.

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