Rejected Gold Parkour - Medium

[iiNavy]

This parkour has a lot of gold (not everything is gold tho) please submit this map , if it isint that good i will add more okay
Also pls add c the finish cuz i dont know how to insert that, but, Here is the preview!:

 

[Nathanpls]

Hi there,
I am no map judge so this is just personal opinions.

As the map is just floating blocks without a distinct theme and varied parkour I wouldn't consider the map as original. Another thing is that because of the lack of detail, theme and parkour variation it's not likely to be accepted as these types of maps aren't accepted anymore.

Anyways good luck!

 

[iiNavy]

Hi there,
I am no map judge so this is just personal opinions.

As the map is just floating blocks without a distinct theme and varied parkour I wouldn't consider the map as original. Another thing is that because of the lack of detail, theme and parkour variation it's not likely to be accepted as these types of maps aren't accepted anymore.

Anyways good luck!

Okay. i will add more just to make it look better
Also im not that good at building to be honest. but i will try my best!

 

[Nathanpls]

Okay. i will add more just to make it look better
Also im not that good at building to be honest. but i will try my best!

We all start somewhere and getting feedback on builds is what makes us better and more creative! There’s nothing wrong on failing a few times before you get it right. I too made maps like this and tried to submit. But just stay focused and don’t let the block limit stop you but use every bit of creativity that comes to you.

I recommend looking at maps on the last pages on each difficulty just to get a feel of what requires of you as a mapper.

 

[DapperDaphne]

Hello! I would like to share my opinion. I agree with what Naythan said so maybe you could have one main build like a gold bar or something like that and then build the parkour around it. Of course, double-check to make sure the idea is original. Have a great day!

 

[Anacoustic]

Hi there Jacob,

Im sorry to tell ya your map has been rejected.

There is not a clear THEME for your map, I'd advise you create a map with a more distinct theme. You can check up on already accepted maps here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/

The BUILD of your map is lacking in detail and depth, try to create a main build to incorporate your parkour around.

The PARKOUR is an issue, it's mainly floating which is no longer accepted on Manacube. Secondly, it fits the difficulty and length of a medium so that's good (you didn't specify this, so I'm assuming this is the difficulty). Next, the blocks used within the parkour jumps lack variety. I advise the use of blocks such as fence gates, ice, piston heads, water, fences and trapdoors to spice up your parkour and make it more enjoyable.

Thank you for the submission, I hope to see more from you. Have a wonderful day ! [Josh]

-Ana