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You trying to trick people into thinking you're a different person than the submitter?
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Most of the parkour is floating, and doesn't look performed properly. I suggest you try to put the parkour on the build(s) instead of around them, or try to improve the parkour as is.
good luck with future submissions,
acid
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Most of the parkour is floating, and doesn't look performed properly. I suggest you try to put the parkour on the build(s) instead of around them, or try to improve the parkour as is.
good luck with future submissions,
acid
Hello Papaman_7,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around Greek structure (GreekTemple). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build of your map lacks detail and texture as it's so small. Try to enlarge your builds so that you can add the detail that it's missing and base the parkour around that build. Most of the parkour is floating which isn't allowed and does make the map look messy; having a larger build with better pathing will fix this! In addition, you will be able to remove a lot of your barriers with a larger build. These barriers make the map feel clunky and messy; without these barriers the parkour will flow a lot better and be less messy.
The PARKOUR fits the length of an expert map and the difficulty of a medium map. You will need to be sure to have consistent parkour to the difficulty you'd like to accomplish in your map. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, fences, ladders and slime. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Hayley]
If you have any questions, feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around Greek structure (GreekTemple). Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build of your map lacks detail and texture as it's so small. Try to enlarge your builds so that you can add the detail that it's missing and base the parkour around that build. Most of the parkour is floating which isn't allowed and does make the map look messy; having a larger build with better pathing will fix this! In addition, you will be able to remove a lot of your barriers with a larger build. These barriers make the map feel clunky and messy; without these barriers the parkour will flow a lot better and be less messy.
The PARKOUR fits the length of an expert map and the difficulty of a medium map. You will need to be sure to have consistent parkour to the difficulty you'd like to accomplish in your map. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, fences, ladders and slime. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future. [Hayley]
If you have any questions, feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
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