Rejected Arrival - Hard map

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Great theme and nice build, although it's an interesting choice to change the colour palette of the spacecraft. In the movie it's a pretty iconic deep black colour, no?
 

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Hello guyseth and ThomasHyper,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.
 

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Great theme and nice build, although it's an interesting choice to change the colour palette of the spacecraft. In the movie it's a pretty iconic deep black colour, no?
Tbh i havent watched the movie. I think seth has but not sure
 

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Great theme and nice build, although it's an interesting choice to change the colour palette of the spacecraft. In the movie it's a pretty iconic deep black colour, no?
the ship appears black in many scenes because it is in the shadow of the rest of the ship, the actual colour is a metallic gray.
 

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Hello guyseth and ThomasHyper,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The build is alright. Given your theme choice, there isn't a lot of room for details. The parkour of course can make up for this if executed well.
The parkour has some concerning areas:
-The pathing is quite odd, with a few spots that are just floating and now really being incorporated with the build. (pictures below):
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In addition to this, the first area of the map feels like jump vomit (too many unnecessary blocks.) Try to use different blocks that might reflect your theme better rather than unnecessary blocks. The two teleport blocks near the beginning of the map also felt unnecessary.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
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