Rejected Baguette map

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CheezySoup

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Never done this before, I hope this is how it works.

Name: CheezySoup
Map name: Baguette
Plot warp: /plot h CheezySoup 3
Difficulty: Medium
Number of jumps: 53
Number of checkpoints: 6

It's exactly what you think it is: a giant baguette! One of the first few maps I've tried to make, so its not very good XD

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hmm ok :(
I guess we'll see
also sry just actually did ur map, just a few things from someone whos had a lot of map rejects lol

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these two spots are the only ones i noticed, but there could be more, where u have to go backwards to progress... mana doesn't like that cuz its not speed-run friendly. they'd prefer you just go straight and turn and stuff, but sharp turns >90° are highly advised against.

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one thing i learned the hard way was no one reads signs. Its a fact, logically speaking, no one cares enuf on a map to sit there reading instructions, for that reason, in places like this or the piston spot add glass to show the next jump. so like on this one replace the corner few blocks where the head is with glass so the person can see where to slime to.

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also ur map has a lot of repetition in jumps (i.e. ladders, and slabs/birch) u can spice it up by adding doors, trapdoors (i saw one), vines (instead of ladders), etc.

also the baguette is a single block, and thats a hit-or-miss with mana cuz of block texturing, that's not to say it won't work, it could, its just a helluva gambit (one im taking in a few of my maps lol)... if u need help dm me on discord or msg here and id love to help u as one "starving" map creator to another lol.
 

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omg thank you so much for the help! I really want to improve so people giving me tips is so helpful <3
 

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Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme is original, so good job on that!

The build itself is quite simple and does lack detailing/texture. It's quite hard to add details to the baguette alone, so I would suggest adding an additional build such as a table/plate. That way you will be able to add more details to the baguette, and it won't be floating.

As mentioned above, the parkour itself is sadly repetitive. use more variation such as water, ice, soul sand, doors, piston bases, cocoa beans, daylight sensors etc to space out your variation and have a better flow!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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