Rejected Monster Under the Bed Map (Easy)

[Abbylicity]

Player/ Creator: Abbylicity (Abby M.)
Photos: https://www.mediafire.com/?m6gwfqpswqn8aix
Warp: /warp Abbylicitypk
Difficulty: Easy
# of Jumps: ~40
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This course is called Monster Under the Bed, and took about 2.5 hours to make. Barrier blocks were used. It would be much appreciated if this map was added!
P.S. The grass blocks would be turned to void.

 

[fribe]

We cant get to the plot unless you give a warp. make a warp by doing /warpset (name). I'll come back and give a response to this map then

 

[Txilsy]

Heya Abbylicity,

Please read the map submission format here http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/

Just make a list of the creator, difficulty, warp etc. to keep it clear. Pictures would be nice as well, so we know it's the right course. And like Joe said above, /warpset (name) will give your plot a warp, so it's easier to go to.

I'll check it out soon!

 

[Abbylicity]

I fixed it. Thx for your help!

 

[Flaw]

hello there, the build is really nice i like the idea but here comes some criticism
- the barriers can be used to cheat in alot of jumps(i get y they r there but u went a bit crazy with em)
-the barriers get the way of ur jumps at some points
-at this part u can jump around and skip a bit http://prntscr.com/ebg3ro
-there are some parts that are a bit confusing( add some signs showing where to go saying stuff like 'Over here!' and 'This way!'
-also it makes it easier for staff if the ground is gone and the parkour is floating
Thanks for listening to my complaints lol, but i hope u improve this parkour by reading a few of these
Cya <3

 

[Abbylicity]

AwesomeJimmy do u know a way to get rid of the ground underneath. (Also thx for the tips!)

 

[Flaw]

AwesomeJimmy do u know a way to get rid of the ground underneath. (Also thx for the tips!)

hey Abbylicity, im so glad the tips could help you with this also the easiest way to remove the ground is to use world edit if u dont have access to it then u can ask someone thats online on the server, im sure thed be willing to help

 

[Slumpd]

Hey Abbylicity,
I really love the idea of this parkour, its very unique and I haven't seen it before
But there are some things you could improve on.
The barriers are very poorly done, they can be used to exploit a lot of jumps and skip quite a bit.
The Wooden Floor looks kind of awkward but that's an easy fix and you could probably add more detail to the bed/person
Best of luck

 

[Shron]

Hey abbylicity,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this course, but that does not mean this course is bad. I actually really like the theme and idea of it. It is really really cool, but I agree with Couch and Flaw. The barriers confuse the course more, than it helps. It also is very exploitable on many points. You should maybe try to fix the barriers and always try to avoid using many barriers. If you need help or if you have questions, you can message me and I will help you for resubmitting it.
Thanks for submitting this course and I hope to see more in the future!

Shron