Rejected Distortion World / Easy Parkour

[Shinxray]

Builder : Shinxray
ID : -34 ; -24 / /plot visit Shinxray 1
Difficulty : Easy
Checkpoint : 1
Number of jumps : 40 (?)
Screenshots :

 

[mario139_2525]

I've test this jump.
Is very beautiful but for me, it's a medium jump

 

[iSatOnApenguin]

The theme is pretty nice and there is a variety of jumps which makes the map enjoyable, but just like Mario said it could be more of a medium map because of the neo jumps which could be difficult for some players that are newer to parkour.

 

[Shinxray]

The theme is pretty nice and there is a variety of jumps which makes the map enjoyable, but just like Mario said it could be more of a medium map because of the neo jumps which could be difficult for some players that are newer to parkour.

Thx for your message, I nerf the neo jump like you said c:

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Shinxray,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme is original and built well.
- The build looks good, though you might give a second look at some parts that give it a messy look. These mainly are the little floating bits but also the colour choices and usage. Overall, it is clear what the theme is but I think you could use more of the build to parkour on.
- The jumps have some variety, it is fun, interesting and challenging. As your build isn't all used to parkour on, I would say to add more different type of jumps and increase the difficulty to medium. This however is your course so your choice though.
- The length does suit the easy difficulty as of now and don't be afraid to use neos, as those are a good way to help newer players work on their parkour skill. You could also help them by simply putting a checkpoint or failsafe at the harder jumps.

Feel free to resubmit if you have made major changes and feel like your map has the potential to get accepted.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.