Rejected Pickaxe Parkour By:KingNoah

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#1
It is a pickaxe themed parkour.
Amount of jumps:32
Rank: Easy
It is at my second plot in map maker world.
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Review c: :
Poisitives points :
-The number of jumps fit with the difficulty
-The build fit with the theme

Negatives points :
-The theme is pretty common and not original
-Some info about pixel art here : http://forums.manacube.com/threads/pixel-art.9394/
-There is NO CHECKPOINT ?! (wat)
-No variation of jump (Just normal and ladder jump, try to had ice/fence...)
-Some jump are too hard for an easy parkour (The jump into the stone pickaxe, the third jump into a ladder and why do you put a 2 block neo? It's an easy no ?)

I hope I help you c:
 

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hey Shinxray I put checkpoints throughout the map and idk why I decided to put a 2 block neo.its just cuz why not and Ik those are hard jumps I just want to have some skill testing and yes ik its pixel art
 

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hey Shinxray I put checkpoints throughout the map and idk why I decided to put a 2 block neo.its just cuz why not and Ik those are hard jumps I just want to have some skill testing and yes ik its pixel art
I didn't found your checkpoints D:
And if you want to test people, it's would be better in a harder map but not in an easy (You can at least left the first neo jump c: )
 

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Hey Noah,
I am sorry to tell you, but I will reject your map.
The points of me rejecting it were already mentioned. The difficulty does not fit easy at all, the jumps are really repetitive and PixelArt itself gets rarely accepted, just if it is astonishing good. Try to find a better theme and keep jumps on a big variety, so player can enjoy your map more!

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