Rejected Pixel Art Parkour: Easy Parkour

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Hi I have been working on this maps for weeks;this is my first ever parkour map I have ever done. So I hope You enjoy!
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Btw i took the picture on a different plot. Thx hf!!
 

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Review :p :
Positives points :
-The build fit with the theme
-The numbers of jump fit almost with the difficulty (46 jump (?) for easy)

Negatives points :
-The theme is common and not original (and a bit strange ?)
-Read this pls c: : http://forums.manacube.com/threads/pixel-art.9394/
-No variation of jump :c (Add slime/fence .... and more ladder c:)
-You can skip a part of the jump by jumping on the basket ball pixel art
-The final block (with the pressure plat) need to be the color of the difficulty (Lime wool here)

I hope I help you c:
 
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Review :p :
Positives points :
-The build fit with the theme
-The numbers of jump fit almost with the difficulty (46 jump (?) for easy)

Negatives points :
-The theme is common and not original (and a bit strange ?)
-Read this pls c: : http://forums.manacube.com/threads/pixel-art.9394/
-No variation of jump :c (Add slime/fence .... and more ladder c:)
-You can skip a part of the jump by jumping on the basket ball pixel art
-The final block (with the pressure plat) need to be the color of the difficulty (Lime wool here)

I hope I help you c:
ok Thanku so much for the info i had no clue xD
but um ya so ill arrange some of that and i hope it will be better soon thanx! :)
 

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Hello Future,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme is obviously pixel art which, like stated above, not accepted anymore.
- The build is just like the theme pixel art so it doesn't look too appealing. You can find more reasoning behind this in the thread regarding pixel art, Shinxray kindly provided the link for you above.
- The jumps are fine and would be great to see in another future map. Just make sure to add more variety where possible.
- The length is alright, though I'd still recommend to add more types of jumps.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
 
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