Rejected Final Resubmission | Lit Candle | Expert

[GeneralHamster]

My final resubmission

General_Hamster
/plot h General_Hamster in map maker world and look for red arrow(Not included in course)
Expert

I changed the candle so it's not completely quartz. I also tried to add some melted wax :)

This is my last time resubmitting unless I'm given another chance

But I don't want to just keep submitting a course but this is prob my closest course that might get accepted

 

[Shinxray]

Review :

Positives points :
-The build fit with the theme
-The variety of jump is really good
-The difficulty of parkour fit with the Expert Difficulty

Negatives points :
-The candle looks good but I don't really understand why you use nether bricks.
-The parkour is a bit confusing in the candle (add some sign on it) and add sign on some invisible block (Not only in the candle for this).
-I don't really like the "landmine" with the slime block, the jump is a bit hard and the land mine is really punitive.
-I don't like also the start of the parkour, it's just "floating glass", try to decorated a bit this part (like not only a single floating block)
-It's impossible :

Spoiler: First impossible thing

Spoiler: Second impossible thing

My opinion :
If you try to remove some problem (impossible thing and add sign on invisible block), I think the parkour can be accepted c:

I hope I help you c:

Edit : This part is too confusing, add some sign or just change it

Spoiler: Confusing part

 

[GeneralHamster]

Review :

Positives points :
-The build fit with the theme
-The variety of jump is really good
-The difficulty of parkour fit with the Expert Difficulty

Negatives points :
-The candle looks good but I don't really understand why you use nether bricks.
-The parkour is a bit confusing in the candle (add some sign on it) and add sign on some invisible block (Not only in the candle for this).
-I don't really like the "landmine" with the slime block, the jump is a bit hard and the land mine is really punitive.
-I don't like also the start of the parkour, it's just "floating glass", try to decorated a bit this part (like not only a single floating block)
-It's impossible :

Spoiler: First impossible thing

Spoiler: Second impossible thing

My opinion :
If you try to remove some problem (impossible thing and add sign on invisible block), I think the parkour can be accepted c:

I hope I help you c:

Edit : This part is too confusing, add some sign or just change it

Spoiler: Confusing part

Thanks for the response,

I fixed the impossible parts (They were mistakes)

But the part you said was confusing isn't the way you think it is.

You looked at the parkour the wrong way

 

[Shinxray]

Thanks for the response,

I fixed the impossible parts (They were mistakes)

But the part you said was confusing isn't the way you think it is.

You looked at the parkour the wrong way

So this part is confusing if I looked at the wrong way xD

 

[Codiing]

Looks pretty decent, if you were able to fill a little bit more in it would look amazing. So far good work man.

 

[GeneralHamster]

So this part is confusing if I looked at the wrong way xD

Yep lol
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Looks pretty decent, if you were able to fill a little bit more in it would look amazing. So far good work man.

Thanks :)

 

[Txilsy]

Hey Hamster,

Due to recent changes with the Parkour reset, your plot currently is not around. If you would like to re-submit it anyway, please make another thread. If you have your plot downloaded make sure to include that, staff can help you paste it back later. For now, I will close this thread. Hope to see more courses in the future! :)

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/

 

[Shron]

"Unclosed" again.
I will upload this plot to the new map maker world for you and staff will review it soon!

Shron

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Hamster,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

After a few attempts, we do really appreciate your time and hard work you've put into your map. We have decided to reject in the end anyways. The theme wasn't quite working out for you as it wasn't too attractive of a build and the jumps were confusing overall. Most jumps are original, so that's pretty cool. But other than that, I'm sorry to tell you that it doesn't quite meet the requirements after all.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/