Rejected 50's dinner parkour (resubmission)

[49ersDude]

/plot v 49ersDude 3
easy
40 jumps
5 checkpoints

 

[49ersDude]

 

[49ersDude]

 

[ObamaGaming]

still called a diner

 

[49ersDude]

 

[BinLicker]

Did you adjust the build according to the feedback given when this was rejected?

 

[Acrellux]

49ers you know you can put the screenshots all in one post right?

 

[49ersDude]

49ers you know you can put the screenshots all in one post right?

omg how pls tell it takes so long to do on all those pages

 

[49ersDude]

Did you adjust the build according to the feedback given when this was rejected?

yes

 

[Acrellux]

Here you gooo

 

[49ersDude]

Is there anything I should add more?

 

[BASSBOAT]

Unless I am complete and utter trash (which is a possibility) I don't think the jump at the beginning of the map from a slab to an enchantment table is possible in version 1.8.9. Seeing as that is the version of parkour on this server, that would need to be fixed.

 

[BASSBOAT]

Unless I am complete and utter trash (which is a possibility) I don't think the jump at the beginning of the map from a slab to an enchantment table is possible in version 1.8.9. Seeing as that is the version of parkour on this server, that would need to be fixed.

Additionally, there are a few jumps utilizing ladders around corners that I feel are too difficult for the easy difficult (especially the jump before the mine cart at the end).

 

[49ersDude]

im going to test this pk in 1.8.9 to see ok.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello 49ersDude,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The build still looks the same; please use the feedback in your previous submission and expand your build a bit!
The parkour is varied a bit more, but is still a concern because it is hard to navigate at times (barriers are a huge part of this issue.) Also as BASSBOAT mentioned, the jump at the start from the slab to the enchantment table is indeed impossible, and would need to be adjusted. The difficulty also still feels inconsistent.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina