Hello rednax_mc, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The theme is a bit odd, other than having a 5 (ish) block jump there was no theme I could work out. We like to see our maps having themes we can spot easily!
Build: The build was okay, again as I said there wasn't a noticeable theme so the build wasn't good or bad.
Parkour: The parkour lacked jump variation and felt very repetitive overall. Try using a variety of jump types and block types in your future parkour!
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3