A story ive been making please read and give feedback

[jasper_]

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/218843692-wings-of-fire-storm's-coming
Tell me what u think!

 

[JavaElite]

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/218843692-wings-of-fire-storm's-coming
Tell me what u think!

Both a candidate for owner AND an author? What else could a person ask for? My vote is yours for sure! :)

As for the book, you seem to have a lot of potential when it comes to writing. You should seriously consider continuing this book and having someone help you edit it! For simple grammar and pronunciation mistakes and such.

Whatever you choose, I wish you good luck.

Regards,

-Java

 

[jasper_]

Both a candidate for owner AND an author? What else could a person ask for? My vote is yours for sure! :)

As for the book, you seem to have a lot of potential when it comes to writing. You should seriously consider continuing this book and having someone help you edit it! For simple grammar and pronunciation mistakes and such.

Whatever you choose, I wish you good luck.

Regards,

-Java

Thank you so much! Did you like it?

 

[jasper_]

Yeah I use grammarly but Im not a premium user so i cant edit so of it.

 

[jasper_]

Look at the video I made! A trailer for a fav book of mine!
https://spark.adobe.com/video/X132ccJfiF5aD