Rejected Abandoned Desert - Insane

[Fyrk]

Map Name: Abandoned Desert
Creator: og_fyrk
Difficulty: Insane
Jumps: 102
Checkpoints: 7
/plot visit og_fyrk

I tried hiding some checkpoints, while alerting the player, when he jumps past one or is close to one.
Every jump was tested by me.

 

[Ziooo]

Very nice map!

 

[Mr_DagALkeef_B7]

Good luck!

 

[mister_fawkes]

+1 fire

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

Unfortunately, your map is being rejected.
Your theme is unoriginal as we already have desert/abandoned maps.

The build itself is lacking depth and details. Have a main build so that you can make terrain and add details that this map is currently missing. You will remove the floating parkour/build factors too, bringing the map more together.

The parkour itself is inconsistent throughout and lacking variation. Due to the lack in variation, the parkour is repetitive. Use more variation such as cocoa beans, water, trapdoors, ice, soul sand, piston bases, cobble walls, glass panes, etc so you can space out your variation. With checkpoint placement, checkpoints need to be visible or there needs to be signage pointing towards the checkpoint sign itself.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future!
Have a good day/night
-Hayley