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Loading Status...Rejected Adventure Land
- Thread starter SpiiderBoy938934839849384
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Hello SpiiderBoy,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many maps that are biome themed/have story lines. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, it's accurate to the theme, but I would suggest trying to make your build have a bit more originality to it, rather than building trees exactly how they usually spawn in survival.
The parkour has some variety, however I feel at times throughout the map you did group them quite a bit. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just fences, then just ladders etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
There are a lot of floating jumps. Try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating around the build and the void, and implement them into the build more where possible, as having a lot of floating jumps can make your map look quite messy.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy/medium map.
In the future, please read this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ and follow the format listed in your submission. It's important to include details such as your ign, the location of your map, the difficulty, number of jumps etc. so it is easier for members of the community to test out your map and give you feedback, as well as making it easier for map judges to find and judge your map ☺︎
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many maps that are biome themed/have story lines. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't great, it's accurate to the theme, but I would suggest trying to make your build have a bit more originality to it, rather than building trees exactly how they usually spawn in survival.
The parkour has some variety, however I feel at times throughout the map you did group them quite a bit. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just fences, then just ladders etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more, as this will make your map more enjoyable to complete.
There are a lot of floating jumps. Try to avoid having an excessive number of jumps floating around the build and the void, and implement them into the build more where possible, as having a lot of floating jumps can make your map look quite messy.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy/medium map.
In the future, please read this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ and follow the format listed in your submission. It's important to include details such as your ign, the location of your map, the difficulty, number of jumps etc. so it is easier for members of the community to test out your map and give you feedback, as well as making it easier for map judges to find and judge your map ☺︎
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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