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Loading Status...Rejected Air Force One - Hard
- Thread starter 4thForce
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Hello 4th, I'm going to be giving you a -0.5 with a list of the reasons below.
The Build / Theme: The build looks really good, but there is already an Airplane map (donator) with just a few changes.
The Parkour is what got me the most. It felt like it was a little repetitive in some places, and could be changed. You could also go over the build with some of the experienced parkour players on the server, like me, des, bluepottwal, casey, tokkie, etc.
Good Luck
- Noah // Claptain_
The Build / Theme: The build looks really good, but there is already an Airplane map (donator) with just a few changes.
The Parkour is what got me the most. It felt like it was a little repetitive in some places, and could be changed. You could also go over the build with some of the experienced parkour players on the server, like me, des, bluepottwal, casey, tokkie, etc.
Good Luck
- Noah // Claptain_
Hello 4th,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around planes. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is good. It is made well with nice details and structures, so good job on that!
The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map, so good job on that! It felt to easy for one through, would fit better in medium. Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around planes. Before creating a parkour please make sure to check out this template here to see all the maps accepted on the server!
The BUILD of your map is good. It is made well with nice details and structures, so good job on that!
The PARKOUR fits the length of a hard map, so good job on that! It felt to easy for one through, would fit better in medium. Your parkour has some variance, but most of it is in clumps causing it to still be repetitive. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
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