play.manacube.com
Loading Status...Rejected Álix - Insane
- Thread starter Paludismo
- Start date
- Status
- Joined
- Dec 28, 2019
- Posts
- 1,209
- Ratings
Hello!
Sorry for the late response
This is an awesome start!
Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
This theme seems to be original, so good job on that! Please feel free to let us know the theme during resub, as we were unsure what it was! Feel free to look at all our themes here to check.
The build itself is cool and detailed! Unfortunately, the square terrain at the front does not look right/flush to the terrain underneath. In addition, the terrain underneath is not shaped too well! I believe it'd look better starting at the blue grid section!
The parkour itself was quite inconsistent throughout, with some sections being harder/easier than others! There was also sections with a lot of running, which means there needs to be a change in pathing to prevent this. Unfortunately, it is repetitive due to the lack of variation. Use more variation such as ladders, cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, ice, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow.
Be sure to spread out your checkpoints throughout, as there aren't too many right now!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
Sorry for the late response
This is an awesome start!
Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
This theme seems to be original, so good job on that! Please feel free to let us know the theme during resub, as we were unsure what it was! Feel free to look at all our themes here to check.
The build itself is cool and detailed! Unfortunately, the square terrain at the front does not look right/flush to the terrain underneath. In addition, the terrain underneath is not shaped too well! I believe it'd look better starting at the blue grid section!
The parkour itself was quite inconsistent throughout, with some sections being harder/easier than others! There was also sections with a lot of running, which means there needs to be a change in pathing to prevent this. Unfortunately, it is repetitive due to the lack of variation. Use more variation such as ladders, cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, ice, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow.
Be sure to spread out your checkpoints throughout, as there aren't too many right now!
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
- Status