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Loading Status...Rejected Ancient Ruins parkour map. *Reposted*
- Thread starter XMIMagma
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Hi magma, before i give my review, please note that I am not a map judge and that nothing I say has any affect on the final verdict.
ORIGINALITY: the theme ancient ruins is not very original and has been used multiple times in the past. I recommend you look at https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/mobilebasic next time you make a map to verify that your idea is original.
BUILD: I think the build is OK. I like the terraforming you did but i think it could be a little bit better, and (usually) it’s better to make your map one main structure as opposed to multiple, as it makes your build look less cluttered.
PARKOUR: as i cannot get on right now to look i won’t be able to give you a fair review. :(
Overall this is a -1 from me because of the things aforementioned, but as i didn’t check out the parkour my review isn’t entirely fair.
GL <3, JJ
ORIGINALITY: the theme ancient ruins is not very original and has been used multiple times in the past. I recommend you look at https://docs.google.com/document/u/0/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/mobilebasic next time you make a map to verify that your idea is original.
BUILD: I think the build is OK. I like the terraforming you did but i think it could be a little bit better, and (usually) it’s better to make your map one main structure as opposed to multiple, as it makes your build look less cluttered.
PARKOUR: as i cannot get on right now to look i won’t be able to give you a fair review. :(
Overall this is a -1 from me because of the things aforementioned, but as i didn’t check out the parkour my review isn’t entirely fair.
GL <3, JJ
Hello XMIDemon,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map with the exact same name/theme (AncientRuins.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194
The build is mostly floating islands, and maps that are based around floating islands are typically no longer accepted. This is because they have been highly overdone in some of our earlier maps. There are a decent amount of details to be seen, however, so good job on that!
The parkour is quite confusing in a lot of places, so be sure to have plenty of directional indicators (signs/heads) so players know where to go! The parkour is also quite repetitive throughout with vines, so try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! The length of this course is good for the easy difficulty; however, some of the jumps are a bit tricky (this goes with the directional issue.)
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map with the exact same name/theme (AncientRuins.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194
The build is mostly floating islands, and maps that are based around floating islands are typically no longer accepted. This is because they have been highly overdone in some of our earlier maps. There are a decent amount of details to be seen, however, so good job on that!
The parkour is quite confusing in a lot of places, so be sure to have plenty of directional indicators (signs/heads) so players know where to go! The parkour is also quite repetitive throughout with vines, so try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! The length of this course is good for the easy difficulty; however, some of the jumps are a bit tricky (this goes with the directional issue.)
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
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