Rejected AnimalPK - Medium

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Llighty

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by llighty, 41 jumps, /plot home llighty 2, 3 checkpoints
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There are so, so, so many animal maps... and a map with even a similar build, ForestAnimals was accepted recently.
 

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Hello Llighty,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is not original. There have been many maps already with the animal theme. Please read over the document in this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't bad, it is quite simple though.
The parkour is good. You used a good variety of blocks and items to create original jumps, so well done!
The parkour is in the build, but it does float above it quite a bit. Please try to implement the jumps a bit more into the build, since having them floating above can make it look quite messy.
There were a couple impossible jumps, so please be careful in the future to make sure the jumps you are building are possible.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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