Rejected Apple orchard - Expert

[CYAN_TOAD]

Map creator: CYAN_TOAD
Map helpers: 49ersDude and Keedritsj
Map difficulty: Expert
Map location: /plot visit CYAN_TOAD
Map checkpoints: 14
Map jumps: 116

 

[BinLicker]

The number of jumps is still way too high for a hard difficulty. Take a look at this likehttps://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ tp see how many jumps are expected for each difficulty. I would really recommend asking chat for some map testers before submitting a map because that way you can get some instant feedback on your map and make it perfect before submission. I would also recommend taking a look at /warp beta to see the level of quality of accepted maps. Have a lovely day
-Bin

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

Thank you so much for the feedback! I would like to know what jumps I should cut so my map would fit the difficulty, thank you!

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

The number of jumps is still way too high for a hard difficulty. Take a look at this likehttps://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ tp see how many jumps are expected for each difficulty. I would really recommend asking chat for some map testers before submitting a map because that way you can get some instant feedback on your map and make it perfect before submission. I would also recommend taking a look at /warp beta to see the level of quality of accepted maps. Have a lovely day
-Bin

I fixed the map

 

[BinLicker]

I fixed the map

Did you reduce the jump amount?

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

Did you reduce the jump amount?

Yes but if there are anymore jumps you think i should get rid of I will!

 

[BinLicker]

Yes but if there are anymore jumps you think i should get rid of I will!

What amount of jumps do you have now and if it's lower make sure to edit the original forum post with the new correct number of jumps

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

What amount of jumps do you have now and if it's lower make sure to edit the original forum post with the new correct number of jumps

Actually the correct amount of jumps is already on my thread

 

[49ersDude]

apple im going to beaf up the pk so it can be a expert ok

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

apple im going to beaf up the pk so it can be a expert ok

Hang on! Let me help!

 

[49ersDude]

ok

 

[CYAN_TOAD]

What amount of jumps do you have now and if it's lower make sure to edit the original forum post with the new correct number of jumps

I changed the difficulty to expert and changed the map a little.

 

[49ersDude]

I changed the difficulty to expert and changed the map a little.

me and cyan_toad added some neo's /1 double neo, and some realy hard ladder jumps

 

[Elly_x]

Hello CYAN_TOAD, 49ersDude, and Keedritsj,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is semi-original as we don't have any maps based around an apple, but we do have a lot of food maps.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The apple is very square and doesn't resemble an actual apple. It is also lacking texture in the build. I would like to see more details to make it more than just a apple.

The PARKOUR fits the length of an expert map but is far too easy for one. The parkour is also extremely repetitive with many neos and clumps of jumps. To add more variance, try adding jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly