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Loading Status...Rejected B1 Battle Droid - Medium
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Hello Aeris16,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is not really original (like I said on your D-O submission), we already have quite a few Star Wars maps but not Battle droids so I will give you some credits. Build is not that great but for different reason than D-O. The character looks appealing enough but your actually build is a bit worse. The gun looks really disproportionate, and a lot of details are missing in your build, which is because the build is a bit too small to add more important details, try scaling up your builds next time, but if you wanna stick with this build, please try fixing the gun and the shape of the build : the neck is too short, the "nose" is too big compared to the rest of the head, his arms are too thick, the pelvis is too small and the legs are too short.
The parkour is not that bad, there is a few bad jumps in the map, like the hh timings, or the ladder to white carpet with the cobblewall inside, and it could have some directions throughtout (example : indicate that the white carpets at the start are slimes ; another way is improving the flow of the map (no sharp turns between jumps) and avoid blind jumps) and it needs one more checkpoint between 2nd checkpoint and the end, but it was rather enjoyable.
Thanks for submitting your map.
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is not really original (like I said on your D-O submission), we already have quite a few Star Wars maps but not Battle droids so I will give you some credits. Build is not that great but for different reason than D-O. The character looks appealing enough but your actually build is a bit worse. The gun looks really disproportionate, and a lot of details are missing in your build, which is because the build is a bit too small to add more important details, try scaling up your builds next time, but if you wanna stick with this build, please try fixing the gun and the shape of the build : the neck is too short, the "nose" is too big compared to the rest of the head, his arms are too thick, the pelvis is too small and the legs are too short.
The parkour is not that bad, there is a few bad jumps in the map, like the hh timings, or the ladder to white carpet with the cobblewall inside, and it could have some directions throughtout (example : indicate that the white carpets at the start are slimes ; another way is improving the flow of the map (no sharp turns between jumps) and avoid blind jumps) and it needs one more checkpoint between 2nd checkpoint and the end, but it was rather enjoyable.
Thanks for submitting your map.
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