Rejected Baguette map 2.0 - medium

[CheezySoup]

Already tried submitting this, I've changed it to (hopefully) make it better/more enjoyable

Name: CheezySoup
Map name: Baguette
Plot warp: /plot h CheezySoup 3
Difficulty: Medium
Number of jumps: 53 (give or take a couple)
Number of checkpoints: 5

 

[Aeris16]

gl

 

[CheezySoup]

Thx, if it gets rejected again I'm just gonna give up on this

 

[Aeris16]

Thx, if it gets rejected again I'm just gonna give up on this

Make smthg else lol

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED .
The theme is original, so good job on that!

I appreciate you taking to some of the feedback; however, the overall shaping of the baguette is quite stubby, and would look better thinner/longer. The table is a good start! I would suggest looking at other maps we have currently to see the build standards/get ideas. NorwegianDelicacies is a great map to look at! You could potentially incorporate more of French foods, if that's what you were going for.

The parkour itself fits the difficulty for the most part, so good job on that! Unfortunately, your variation is in clumps which causes the parkour to be repetitive. Try to space out your variation more, to prevent this from happening.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley