Hello Hpdra9oniz3r, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The theme is an original one, nice job there.
Build: The build is mainly just floating islands and unattractive lines of wool. I feel like it needs improvement.
Parkour: The parkour was rather basic, it needed more variation in the jumps department. The difficulty was best suited for an easy map, but still fell a bit short of even that difficulty.
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3