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I'm not going to lie this is a pretty creative theme. The only things that need to be improved is the base doesn't look like something from bedwars and the desert castle floating above doesn't really fit.
Then the parkour looks a little repetitive from the screenshots, so in places the jumps are the same, try to spice things up with different types of jumps. https://manacube.com/threads/what-is-block-variation.64601/
I'm not a map judge so my opinions won't affect your submission, this is just feedback. Good luck
Then the parkour looks a little repetitive from the screenshots, so in places the jumps are the same, try to spice things up with different types of jumps. https://manacube.com/threads/what-is-block-variation.64601/
I'm not a map judge so my opinions won't affect your submission, this is just feedback. Good luck
I suppose I should explain the endstone castle. When a deathmatch occurs, enderdragons spawn. Usually when this happens, people create bases and try to outlive the other team. The enderdragon can break all blocks but endstone and obsidian(?), so it is optimal to make your base out of endstone. Thank you for the feedback though, I will use it to improve!
Hello Matryx526,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is original as we don't have any maps like this on the server, so good job on that!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build has nice added details that were accurate to the game, but the main build was lacking some needed depth. Next time try considering focusing on the main build and making it attractive.
The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map better than a medium map. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders, and slimes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. The parkour was also confusing, try adding directional tools to allow a more smooth path.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
The THEME of your map is original as we don't have any maps like this on the server, so good job on that!
The BUILD of your map is a problem. The build has nice added details that were accurate to the game, but the main build was lacking some needed depth. Next time try considering focusing on the main build and making it attractive.
The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map better than a medium map. Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, ladders, and slimes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. The parkour was also confusing, try adding directional tools to allow a more smooth path.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly
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