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I'm giving this a 0. The theme is original. The build is honestly, in my opinion, a bit messy. I like the detail you put in with the stuff waiting to be blended. (-1 for blending what looks like tomatoes what were you tHiNkInG? Im kidding lol) The parkour itself is quite varied.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
 

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I'm giving this a 0. The theme is original. The build is honestly, in my opinion, a bit messy. I like the detail you put in with the stuff waiting to be blended. (-1 for blending what looks like tomatoes what were you tHiNkInG? Im kidding lol) The parkour itself is quite varied.

I wish you the best of luck! <3
Yeah, I was thinking the same. I wanted to use glass instead of glass panes, but I was basing it off my real blender and the panes looked more realistic. I also want to find some way to keep the parkour up top on the actual blender, but it's hard to do that without making jumps skippable (btw those are cherries not tomatoes don't worry)
 

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I don't like the glass box of stuff and the granite floor/table, if you took them out I'd give you a +1 but I'll give you a 0 until those are changed
 

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I'm giving this a -1

The parkour itself is good. Its difficulty fits with other easy maps... but the build does not look good. The granite ground looks lazy, and the glass case (?) full of ingredients feels out of place. I think it may have been a smarter move to just isolate the blender and not include the countertop or ingredient case.

(Small note, I'd nerf the potion stand jump because I struggled with it even with speed 3)

Pretty much, the blender looks good, but none of the other stuff does. I would change to a +1 if the blender was floating (maybe connected to a floating electric plug, that would be pretty fun).
 

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I'm giving this a -1

The parkour itself is good. Its difficulty fits with other easy maps... but the build does not look good. The granite ground looks lazy, and the glass case (?) full of ingredients feels out of place. I think it may have been a smarter move to just isolate the blender and not include the countertop or ingredient case.

(Small note, I'd nerf the potion stand jump because I struggled with it even with speed 3)

Pretty much, the blender looks good, but none of the other stuff does. I would change to a +1 if the blender was floating (maybe connected to a floating electric plug, that would be pretty fun).
For the potion jump, if it's what I think it is, you're supposed to momentum jump from the side. I might need to add a sign there saying so. As for the design, I'm either removing the extra items or revamping them, haven't decided yet.
 

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I don't like the glass box of stuff and the granite floor/table, if you took them out I'd give you a +1 but I'll give you a 0 until those are changed
I'm giving this a -1

The parkour itself is good. Its difficulty fits with other easy maps... but the build does not look good. The granite ground looks lazy, and the glass case (?) full of ingredients feels out of place. I think it may have been a smarter move to just isolate the blender and not include the countertop or ingredient case.

(Small note, I'd nerf the potion stand jump because I struggled with it even with speed 3)

Pretty much, the blender looks good, but none of the other stuff does. I would change to a +1 if the blender was floating (maybe connected to a floating electric plug, that would be pretty fun).
Removed the fruit container/table, added electrical plug, nerfed a few jumps, and made the glass part of the blender a little cleaner. Thoughts?
 

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I feel like the plug is out of place, I think you should take out the cord completely, make the blender the main focus and have maybe one floating jump at the start and then the rest of the parkour on the blender that you have now
 

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I'm kind of unchanged about the plug, to be honest. The only reason I think it should stay is because it adds more jumps.

On another note, i'd change the heights of the barrier jumps to make them more consistent (In this area)

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I think it would be good if the plug were a little more curved.
 

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I’ll be giving this map +1 , the theme is original and the jumps are varied and the build overall is good, but it is a little bit messy. Good luck!
 

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+1 bit messy as others said but very simplistic and original. Hope it gets accepted <3
 

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Hoi MCBYT,
I'll be accepting your map, for the following reasons:

The theme for your map is original, as there are no blender maps, however we got some electronics maps, so it takes a bit of originality. (It's still super good!)
About the build, it looks appealing and the details made it even better!
[There was a little exploit that has been fixed already, please be careful when doing maps!]

About the parkour, it was varied, however when doing the map it was messy and didn't understand where to go, I've changed it and made it less confusing.

¡Thanks for submitting a map, I would love to see more maps from you!
 
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