Rejected Blueberry Adventure

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Oliver8747

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Just some parkour based off of blueberries
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/warp blueberry to get to it. Also about 73 jumps in total.
It's not that hard it should just be easy/medium even though it has about 73 jumps.
3 checkpoints in total.
That's it......
 
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Look Really Cool maybe u could make the jumps look better because, its just flying block now i suggest u put some more different blocks so it look better Best luck!e
 

Sophie413

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Looks pretty cool, but I suggest maybe making the blueberries have a more variety of colors. The map I think fits medium very well. Also I have never really seen a blueberry map! Lastly maybe change some of the quads, there's a lot of them but overall it was fun!

Good luck!
Sophie
 

Raceh

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I agree with @Sophie413. You should add more detail to the blueberries. Another suggestion would be to add more jumps to it! Good luck! ;)
 

Aidan622006

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Good Luck!
 

Shron

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Hey Temmie,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this map.
First off the theme idea is really nice, but the berries are just cubic and do not look too attractive like that. Also the jumps are pretty repetitive, which loses the fun of it on some parts.
Thank you for submitting the map and I hope to see more in the future!

Shron
 
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