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- Thread starter DaCooPotato
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Hello!
Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
The theme itself is unoriginal as we already have quite a few dog maps! One of them you can look at is BarkBark
The build itself is accurate, so good job on that! I would suggest next time having the two main builds closer/with a flooring to path your parkour across with a shorter distance. Sadly the dogs doo look quite flat as they lack shaping.
The parkour itself fits the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job on that; however, it does seem as though there is a missing jump in the second dog (after the first ladder), making it impossible! Sadly the parkour itself was repetitive. Use more variation such as cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, water, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
Unfortunately, your map has been REJECTED.
The theme itself is unoriginal as we already have quite a few dog maps! One of them you can look at is BarkBark
The build itself is accurate, so good job on that! I would suggest next time having the two main builds closer/with a flooring to path your parkour across with a shorter distance. Sadly the dogs doo look quite flat as they lack shaping.
The parkour itself fits the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job on that; however, it does seem as though there is a missing jump in the second dog (after the first ladder), making it impossible! Sadly the parkour itself was repetitive. Use more variation such as cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, water, etc to space out your variation and have a better flow.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
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