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this is really cute!! right now map judges are kind of particular about floating builds though, so maybe you could make some kind of platform to have the dogs side by side on? like a grassy field or something perhaps with some blueberry bushes or something as well to tie it all together. great map though! gl!
also if you wanna move the second dog closer you could use worldedit and copy and paste it so you don't have to rebuild it. (not sure if you know of worldedit so i thought i'd add)
also if you wanna move the second dog closer you could use worldedit and copy and paste it so you don't have to rebuild it. (not sure if you know of worldedit so i thought i'd add)
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Hello!
This may be quite repetitive to your last submission, so I do apologise.
Unfortunately your map is being REJECTED.
The theme itself is unoriginal, as there area already quite a few dog maps! Feel free to look at our map list here.
The build itself does still lack in shaping. In these cases, it is better to scale the build up slightly, so it looks less "blocky"!
The parkour is the same to the last submission. It does fit the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job in that! The parkour is repetitive / in clumps! Use more variation such as ladders, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, water, etc to space out your variation.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
This may be quite repetitive to your last submission, so I do apologise.
Unfortunately your map is being REJECTED.
The theme itself is unoriginal, as there area already quite a few dog maps! Feel free to look at our map list here.
The build itself does still lack in shaping. In these cases, it is better to scale the build up slightly, so it looks less "blocky"!
The parkour is the same to the last submission. It does fit the length and difficulty of an easy map, so good job in that! The parkour is repetitive / in clumps! Use more variation such as ladders, heads, cocoa beans, trapdoors, doors, vines, daylight sensors, piston bases, water, etc to space out your variation.
We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
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