Rejected Bouncy Buildings - Map submission - by: Damimar

[Damimar]

Username: Damimar
Map name: Bouncy Buildings
Plot ID: -59;-126
Difficulty: Medium (it may be hard, but I chose medium)
Number of jumps: around 70-80

There is an extra bit of parkour under the first island which leads to a cake room. It gives no advantage and it's not a shortcut. It's just a passage to the cake room.

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[Damimar]

I forgot to mention that there are 6 checkpoints

 

[Acrellux]

Hi! I have a bit of feedback to give you.
So first of all, the jumps are repetitive, ladders, water jumps, blocks and heads. Try to add more types of blocks to vary the parkour up.
Second of all, the builds don't look amazing, they could have some work.
Third, this would probably get accepted as an Expert, for there are too many jumps for a medium.

Now, for some flaws.

This entire part can be skipped

You can jump to different fences using the ladders

This ladder allows this parkour to be entirely skipped, and since there isn't another way to get onto the ceiling (the parkour is not accessible from the floor), it's the only way of continuing. The ladder was hidden and should have been easier to find.

Finally, this isn't possible in 1.8.9.

http://imgur.com/a/KZFRvCx

All of these can be fixed easily.

I'm not a map judge so this post won't affect the probability of the acceptance of the map, these are just my opinions. Good luck

 

[jacobsfunparty]

Hi! I have a bit of feedback to give you.
So first of all, the jumps are repetitive, ladders, water jumps, blocks and heads. Try to add more types of blocks to vary the parkour up.
Second of all, the builds don't look amazing, they could have some work.
Third, this would probably get accepted as an Expert, for there are too many jumps for a medium.

Now, for some flaws.

This entire part can be skipped View attachment 44910

You can jump to different fences using the ladders View attachment 44905

This ladder allows this parkour View attachment 44910 to be entirely skipped, and since there isn't another way to get onto the ceiling (the parkour View attachment 44910 is not accessible from the floor), it's the only way of continuing. The ladder was hidden and should have been easier to find. View attachment 44906

Finally, this isn't possible in 1.8.9.

http://imgur.com/a/KZFRvCx

All of these can be fixed easily.

I'm not a map judge so this post won't affect the probability of the acceptance of the map, these are just my opinions. Good luck

The jump into the hole is possible. You just need to jump instead of walk off.

 

[Elly_x]

Hello Damimar,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.

There isn't really a concrete THEME so next time try and base your build around a solid theme such as like a cartoon character or a landmark like a lighthouse.

The BUILD is alright. The green building just looks a little plain and more detail could be added to improve it. You did a good job building the parkour around and inside the buildings keeping everything nice and neat. The build doesn't really correspond with any sort of theme and was poorly executed which is the main issue.

The PARKOUR was alright. The jumps themselves fit the medium difficulty but the length of it did not. 80 jumps fits more into the expert difficulty than the medium. The main issue was the pathing, it was very confusing trying to figure out where to go. What could fix this is minimizing the amount of barriers used as well as more directional signs/heads directing people in the right direction.

Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck on your future submissions. [Jacob]
If you have any questions, feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly