Hello again Amber, Kestinn and Nick,
I am sorry to tell you this map is being
rejected. The theme of the map is
original, as we don't have any other cannons that are this sizeable or of this type on any map on ManaCube, so good job on that. The build is
not very accurate to what a cannon such as this one would look like. The
cannon barrel is extremely cylindrical and
lacks some shaping overall. The
base is also pretty boxy, and the
wheels are an awkward size compared to references similar to the type of cannon this seems to reflect. I think revising the build so that the scale of the parts of the cannon make more sense would help a lot.
The parkour is
extremely hard and pretty annoying in some spaces, even for an insane map. While the
majority of the map was pretty forgiving and
fun to play, there are
some jumps that kill the fun:
are some examples of this. The parkour was otherwise fine, but
definitely would need to be nerfed, especially in these spots if there are plans to resubmit. The main reason the map isn't getting into reviewing is the substantial changes that will have to be made to the build which would require a lot of change in the parkour.
Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord.