Rejected Cereal Mess

Would You Try my Map?

  • Yes

    Votes: 3 60.0%
  • No

    Votes: 1 20.0%
  • Maybe

    Votes: 1 20.0%

  • Total voters
    5
Status
Not open for further replies.
Joined
Jan 19, 2019
Posts
1
#1
Hi I'm an Expert Level on the Parkour Section of Manacube! My username is SilverFoxi and this is the first map I've made. I believe my map, Cereal Mess is an Easy Map as it has around 37 jumps! My ID is "-59;15" on Map Maker World! The map shows a baby/toddler spilling their cereal:
Screen Shot 2019-01-19 at 9.21.30 pm.png
Screen Shot 2019-01-19 at 9.22.42 pm.png
Screen Shot 2019-01-19 at 9.22.54 pm.png
 

r3dstraw

Well-Known Member
VIP
r3dstraw
r3dstraw
VIP
Joined
Dec 22, 2017
Posts
85
Ratings
14
#2
Looks Good but the build is kinda weird looking.
Its not a bad thing, u still might get accepted.
This is my opinion. i Haven't tried the parkour.
Good Luck! :)
 

Shinxray

SrMod | Parkour Manager
Senior Mod
Shinxray
Shinxray
Senior Mod
Joined
Sep 6, 2017
Posts
1,069
Ratings
692 11
#3
Hoi SilverFoxi,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is pretty interesting and original. The build however is not really good, there is a lot of floating blocks in your map, making it messy and unattractive, I also think the character you made could be better. The parkour is not really good too, I found your map pretty repetitive (A lot of ladders and normal jumps) even if there is some slimes, I suggest you to use ice, soul sand, fence.. in your parkour next time !

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
Status
Not open for further replies.