Hello BunkyDA_monkey, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The theme is original, we don't have any accepted cereal maps, but we do have a breakfast map.
Build: The build is quite bright, but equally it's very bland in terms of block shading and textures used throughout the build.
Parkour: The parkour was very repetitive and mainly simple block jumps. I'd like to see you experiment and use a higher variety of jumps.
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3